“BE” editing happening this morning.
My sister has offered her coffee-stained comments on the first 100 pages. Her notes are animated, engaged and incredibly helpful. For example she pointed out that my heroine is a tad too obnoxious in certain situations and that the flow of information is “discombobulating” at times.
Improvements, improvements! Good luck to all other editing writers out there! It’s a magnificent process, is it not?